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musiq (26237@moneybutton.com)

1 year ago

his palms are sweaty lip balms are great-y moms are petty

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glauce

1 year ago

So cool...!!!

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musiq replied:

haha thanks!

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rlcreate

1 year ago

Hey, love it! Needs two more syllables in the second line and one more syllable in the third line to make a haiku, but great attempt! Keep posting!

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glauce replied:

I love that you love it and is sharing the knowledge... I might have a go too!

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glauce replied:

... "are" sharing... (grammar correction... in anticipation of acceptable haikus)

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rlcreate replied:

Thats great yeah give it a go! Haikus are good because they make you think creatively, if you have any questions I'll be happy to help!

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musiq replied:

Thanks! I did my best to count the syllables but it's kind of tricky! Will try harder last time.

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musiq replied:

next time *

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glauce replied:

You are doing great, carry on... I still to start counting syllables... (am working with images have to re-gear for words)

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rlcreate replied:

Hey yeah dont be disheartened, it was a great first attempt, and I'm honestly just happy you're giving it a go, and am really looking forward to seeing what you both come up with. There's no pressure, just have some fun!

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